My Writing

I like my semester writing. I think that I did a good job overall writing a crime fiction short story. I would like to add more details to it and do more research on kidnapping to add some accurate details that help make the story better. My favorite part of my writing is when I explained how Riley was taken and how she was feeling. I could have done a better job developing carl as a character. I could have added some depth to his background. I could add more to my deeper meaning by going more into Riley’s fear of the haunted house and her thoughts when she is first taken and what she thinks about carl.